In respect me and my work I politely request that for this thread from here on in that people only post on the content of the story (any further grammatical and/or spelling corrections is fine with me). All sides have been rather respectful in their opinions thus far but I know all too well how things can get carried away and it would sadden me to have the responses closed out before more people can tell me what they think of it. I hope people can understand this request and thank you both (not trying to use call outs at this point) both for strengthening the integrity of the story and for caring about me possibly taking the correction poorly and defending me.
So let’s get back to what matters most,
What did people think about the story?
Anyone have any speculation as to where Series II will lead us (clues were given in this short).
How many Easter eggs did you find in the original story found here
What was your favorite Easter egg?
Look forward to hearing from you,
Cell